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Next time I'll put more work into the animation, i'll run it at 24 fps and use fancy motion tween with easing and such. promise.
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It's not bad, but the audio is really irritating sometimes.
Funny as hell! The little shit skit was the funniest. Would of gave more star but animation and audio need more work. With better visuals and the same funnyness, your work could be in all time best videos.
That was pretty good friend! Your animation style was simple and bland yet there was some minor details in certain skits. Audio was fair though the one scene with the giant lummox guy and flower nearly blew my ears out. Everything else was a bit fine in lip synching yet the ending was almost cheaply composite. The skit themselves were original and good for a few quick laughs. I really liked the couple of skits you put in here and I also admit they're well written in some to give it that witty tongue and cheek humor (favorite written parts were Steve Irwin, The mother telling his kid off and the kid and his crow). You did a good job friend. I'm going to bestow you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
The Animations weren't the best, but that's not important for me in such a cartoon. Of course, good animations are nice, but more important for me is the content. And there we have our problem, the jokes.
The most jokes are pretty lame and senseless, but unfortunately not in funny way.. I kinda liked the clip with the flower because it was unexpected that it will breath fire. (I thought the guy will eat it, that would be expected and not funny. That's the kind of senseless stuff I like.)
The jokes also are pretty
Just work on it and you'll be fine. Good luck.
P.S.: Sorry if my English is bad.
Not bad. Some of these were actually pretty funny. I'm a bit confused though.. Some of the good dialogue you did have was smothered, for lack of a better word, by poor animation. You even openly admit, in your author comment, that you would "put more work" into your next animation...My question to you is Why didn't you put more work in this time? Why not wait until this was polished more before submitting? This was good, but unfinished.. Looking forward to your next one.
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