This was cute but a tiny bit excessive in certain points. I loved your wild, sensible imaginations here. Your use of anime facial expressions, art styles and such are really well displayed here. Audio was on the very soft side, I couldn't barely hear what was going on. Not only that but I noticed from time to time that the lip synching can be a hair off once in awhile. But in all in good terms it was adorable to say the least, you and your friends just having a good rounded time and just having fun. I'm going to bestow you a 1 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. Hopefully minor improvements can be made, I really liked this short. Its simple yet when you tear away the designs and all the layered themes within it. In the very end its a fun little short about having friends and a good time. I hope you've enjoyed this review friends. Good day.
Author Comments
Part 1 of 3. My friend Ishida, Livewire and I were just having a conversation that I recorded, and Ishida and I decided to animate it in a collaborative effort.
We started this in 2010, and finished part 1 in 2010, but we are only NOW about halfway done with part 2. Not animating the whole time, we're just... lazy. So anyways, part 2 to hopefully come before the year is up. Hope you like it. The red text is who is animating which scene.
Thanks! And yeah, we don't have like a 'studio mic' or anything. We recorded this with a 'headset mic' in the middle of the room, so I did my best increasing the audio digitally. :/ Thanks for the vote! As I said to the previous comment, this was never really intended for front page or to win any awards. Was just something silly I felt like sharing. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you watch parts 2 and 3 when they're released! ^^
Very funny and decent work.. 4/5
Thank you! ^^ Was never meant for 'front page' or anything, just something I felt like sharing, so glad you like it!
