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my first half proper toon
I forgot to add a part, Sorry!
Here is a "fixed" version: http://www.youtube.com/watchv=j_nd_Xy2j_s
Well...it didn't make much sense to me at all. The animation was okay, but it was too short and had almost no plot. The voice was good, but this really needs expanding upon. Also, I'm not sure if this was supposed to be funny or not, but if it was, you need to work on how you present your jokes. Just having some guy with a weird voice write a gay suicide letter isn't funny. It's just...strange. Contextless and strange.
it was improv bro, also, look up stampers Circle and square
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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