sucks fucking sucks

hmm needs work im sure you can do better

For some reason, the audio is horribly out of sync on the first run. I refreshed and checked it three times, no change.

Otherwise, it's decent. Good animation, not as funny as I think it's supposed to be.

And avoid the Wilhelm scream, that's the #1 most used sound effect in Hollywood.

2.5/5

That's pretty good! And on your first try too. I loved the simple random skit and plot. In fact you do well in situational humor in my book (Lip synching, voice acting and sound effects were very well along with those facial expressions in the end)! You got me to crack up on this little simple short. Well done! I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. You did a wonderful job on something so simple yet so very well executed. It like the world's perfect tiniest package or gift, to others it may be meager or small yet to the eyes of the beholder it is something incredibly more. Congratulations! Keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review as I have enjoyed your short. Good day.

Heh, funny animation. :D
It's actually pretty good. :P