Learn to optimize.
Why is this 4.1 megabytes?
Regarding the animation, keep working on it.
Author Comments
This is FR-05T, or "Frost," my first animation project for a digital animation class.
serge1290 responds:
Thanks for your condesned feedback but what do you mean specifically by optimize? I'm new to Flash and this was for class so I hope to learn from it and make better stuff in the future.
That was pretty good friend! This was used in your digital animation class, eh? This to me was a nice decent experimental short to branch off of. Concept was very cute about a fierce little robotic/snow creature named "FR-05T or simply put "Frost" who has a snippy attitude with his observers! Your method was simple since the beginning and ending segments were recycled. Audio was fair, especially minor effects to give "Frost" his minor demeanor or his mannerism (Simple growls to know that he's not kidding with the curious onlooking audience!). You've done well in my in your presentation. I'm going to bestow you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.
serge1290 responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism! Like I said, this is my first Flash animation but I'm glad you liked it for what it is. I DID have a different ending where I didn't recycle the end but found out AFTER I turned it in that it had to be a continuous loop, IE go back to where he eventually started hahaa. I made te revision what it currently is and hopefully get a better grade for that. Thanks again!
I really wasn't that impressed by this. It's just a clip of a weird robot thing going out and looking silly. I mean, I will give you credit on how it wasn't particularly offensive or anything like that. I've seen a lot worse. It seems like this actually could be something that would suffice for a digital animation class. It just doesn't seem too appealing for this website.
There doesn't seem to be much of a message or distinction or anything. That is a funny way of spelling that word. Then again, I don't know how you can spell something with numbers in it. I hope you do well in your class. You need to have a lot more going on.
serge1290 responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism. The idea was given to us from a selected list of planetary conditions and movement styles for a creature we had to make. I chose snowy and jumps. It is my first attempt at Flash animation and was for a class so I hope to improve. I want it here though for more ideas and this is one of the few sites I know you can share your work like this.
Still waiting on a grade for this but I'm taking this concept and using it in an app design for our next project. As for the number thing, I did it to be ironic since it's a robot...kind of like words like 1337="elite" and stuff. I don't know... Hopefully I can expand this animation sometime.