i really liked this short, it is very well coriographed and it shows that we need someone to rely on and help us when we are down and at our weakest moments.

Giving you a 3 for a good animation. It's solid work, but I have to dock you for the storyboard (if you used one.)

You have a great emotive piece, but it falls short in how easy it is for the protaganist to shake the shadows. It's far too simple. The shadows should've swallowed the girl and left him alone and messed with him some more. More faceless people should come and seem to be concerned only to be swept away. The world at his fingertips should tauntingly be kept just out of reach.

The protaganist should have an epiphany and realize these shadows are of his own making. We create our own hells and that's the thing that pushes others away. Then when he confronts the darkness the girl reappears and she pulls him into the light. You can't just run away from the dark -it's always there. You have to confront it. People just show you where the light is when you're ready to embrace it.

very cute.
but i feel like the story was way to simple.

I really nice short film, thanks Cr1sis!

That was awesome!
But one thing though your youtube button doesnt work it's nothing big but just a thing to look at on your next video.