This is a good animation, you obviously know how to animate, maybe try thining your lines down! i gave this a 4/5 well because it deserved it, well done! Also the voices were good too! welcome to newgrounds! :)
for your 1st submission to newgrounds not bad 4/5
That was fantastic! An this was your first creation, eh? You've done a great job to say the honest to goodness least! Your style was rough, and simple. I noticed also that your length and width of the main protagonists your anthropomorphic dog can change to different heights and lengths. However, I find it part of your short's cartoon like atmosphere. I really love that surreal, classic animated feeling. Audio was very well done. You used old timely soundtracks used in many traditional animations. I loved your use of some classical pitched vocal range on the "talking dog" trope which made it a part of him when set in motion. The minor thing I disliked was the voice synthesis used for the robot character however he helped push the story along in this skit. The biggest part that cracked me up was the random situation thrown into good measure near the end which was pure classic comedy! I also learned a valuable lesson in your short. To not jaywalk at anytime, otherwise I might accidentally summon a great powerful worm hole vortex that will sweep me or anybody from within range away into uncharted territories! ... Great job my friend! I'm going to bestow you a 3/5. And a 3/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Again you did a wonderful job here! Good day.
This was amusing. Almost like some kind of crazy hybrid between egorapter and eddsworld.
I like it.