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Hey everyone, this is Team Necronomicon's entry for the 2nd NG Movie Jam. Made in 48 hours.
The theme, Too scared to _____. We chose swim.
Thanks for the Frontpage Tom!
Bunch of pusses; give em hell king toes.
The Toe will not let them get away for their pansy like emotions. Thanks for watching
I've seen enough hentai to know where this going
Your Rating: 3.5
The animation was light-hearted and mediocre. However, the tidbit of comedy element was in there.
You lost 1.5 because you need to maintain a defined art style in your animation; make us know who you are without needing to read your name when the creds role.
Second, your voice quality was off. The spikey-haired bruiser boy was a little too fake-masculant in the voice and the chicken-boy was too girly.
Make it believable.
Also, look into getting better microphones so you don't kill headphone users.
I'll keep the audio in mind for the headphone users next time.
It seemed to be going somewhere, had a couple of good momoents. But the ending was SOOO abrupt and anti-climactic. Ruins the whole thing.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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