this is mature i want to see boob.....
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Episode one: Candy.
The first episode of my new mini-series. Hope you like it.
Also available on my Deviantart page
Flaxington responds:
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Animation could do with a little improvement and maybe a little more comedic rape e.g. lust giggling and slowly dragging passion away just her hands in sight dissapearing behind the table then lust hefting unconcious passion onto the bed, pants drop, massive grin and black screen with fapfapfap noises
overall was pretty funny
Flaxington responds:
The subtlety keeps the joke surprising. I was thinking about adding a giggle and a moan in the cut to black.
I just love it, it's wrong but too dam funny to be mad at.
Flaxington responds:
Good. >:D My plan is working.
That could not bin more wrong
yet felt so right all at the same time it was a little short. :p
Flaxington responds:
Would it make you feel better to know that Lola keeps anna out of situations like that with other people? :P
Territorial Lola is territorial.
Its prety funny :) A little short but good :)
Flaxington responds:
Future episodes will definately be longer. Thanks!
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