HA HA!!!!
everyone akes funny movies,
but thats just taking the piss.
The most Terrifying domestic experience...
RUNING TIME: 1:50
So, here's a little short about a common occurance in my house, only with a talking square. Feedback of ANY kind would be appreciated. Just a little comment to tell me where I went wrong and where I went right. Please?
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HA HA!!!!
everyone akes funny movies,
but thats just taking the piss.
that was actually pretty good!
That was hilarious! Very original and simple in concept (That's the best form of comedy to me!). Its style was simple, a tiny it bland yet you managed to bring your respecting characters to life. Audio was very good, loud in some parts but great nonetheless. Its duration was a bit short yet it was plenty of time to deliver the punchline! I feel sorry for those guys trapped in that house. You left me cracking up the whole time in storywise. Again, as I reiterate you managed to bring about some classic comedy in this short. I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. You've done a smashing job! I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I also hoped you have enjoyed this review. Good day.
Thanks for the review! Regaurdingthe lenght, this is only meant to be a short in the series. Since the actual episodes take so long to make these shorts are meant to be filler between them.
You need to work on your expressions
i like your humor :) nice job, but next time try better audioquality :)
ps: it would be way funnier if you would show the guy thats danding outside just right after the explosion not already before because then the explosion would be more unexpected. this way:
right after that one guy throw the spider out the window *BOOOM* !!! .. *flying peaces of the characters* ... *an arm falls on the guy standing outside* .. he realizes he killed his friends... after that the spider apears next to him grinning *trollface* :D