Bathroom Spiders

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The most Terrifying domestic experience...
So, here's a little short about a common occurance in my house, only with a talking square. Feedback of ANY kind would be appreciated. Just a little comment to tell me where I went wrong and where I went right. Please?
Also, if you feel so inclined... http://godofexploding.new grounds.com/follow

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HA HA!!!!
everyone akes funny movies,
but thats just taking the piss.

The writing was clever.
Sound effects were good.
Some of the background pieces need a little polishing. (e.g, I could only tell the guy was using a computer, through the selection of sound effects used on that part)
Overall, I like this. Do make more, when you find yourself inspired to!

that was actually pretty good!

That was hilarious! Very original and simple in concept (That's the best form of comedy to me!). Its style was simple, a tiny it bland yet you managed to bring your respecting characters to life. Audio was very good, loud in some parts but great nonetheless. Its duration was a bit short yet it was plenty of time to deliver the punchline! I feel sorry for those guys trapped in that house. You left me cracking up the whole time in storywise. Again, as I reiterate you managed to bring about some classic comedy in this short. I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. You've done a smashing job! I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I also hoped you have enjoyed this review. Good day.

GodOfExploding responds:

Thanks for the review! Regaurdingthe lenght, this is only meant to be a short in the series. Since the actual episodes take so long to make these shorts are meant to be filler between them.

You need to work on your expressions

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Sep 23, 2012
5:28 PM EDT
Comedy - Original