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Magic Jizz ep 2 Wardog

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That remote clip was funny as fuck dude. Props to you man

The single most accurate depiction of prison I've ever seen in the whole universe!

Holy shit man you don't need to do that smoothing effect on every single keyframe. Also, your characters look very stiff and lifeless, you should aim to make your characters more living and smooth when you draw them.
I really do like like your sense of humour and I think there is a lot of potential for your work to be really hilarious, but before that you need to get the technical stuff down. Your characters' faces and heads are very static in every scene, so you should try animating them more. I know this takes up more time, but if you want better quality then you have to do it.
Another import thing you overlook is your lines. They are really wobbly and their sizes are random. Try to draw more defined lines with even thickness'.
One last thing, your voice acting is really choppy. When you edit it together leave a bit of space between audio clips or overlap them. The quality of your voice acting itself should naturally improve if you actively try to sound more animated in your speech.
I hope you push yourself to improve as an animator and don't just leave something if you don't think it looks good.

wardog810 responds:

most of the stuff i do is because i am lazy but i am making an effort to improve now

Thisflash is stupid and plus it runs slow with choppy voice acting.

wardog810 responds:

stupid how your just being negative witch is not helpful your good at making reviews

Man! This series gets more messed up! Just when you think your safe some guy behind bars wants to start raping you till you are his b*#@%! It just goes to show you that our protagonists gets in some deeper trouble than whats its worth from after his "innocence". Alot of messed up things occur when our star character first sets foot behind prison life and doesn't get a very friendly welcoming. In fact, his welcoming is a bet more intimate by his deadly peers. And then all Hell starts breaking lose to the big finale. For making me laugh within my mind, I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing on this site. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

wardog810 responds:

i all ways love your reviews