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A young girl accidentally ends up in the ruins of a chess-themed city. She is immediately confronted with the hospitality of the remaining denizens but also gains a companion who is as eager as her to escape this place.

This movie was sort of an unpolished beta-version of the story I'm working on, made in 2012. Don't expect new episodes but rather a reboot!


Edit: Fun fact: I did everything with a half-dead mouse, just bought a tablet.


4 stars. It's not very cliche. Nice job.

Animations are really good, story and character wise it seems pretty promising!
the only problem is that the voices were a bit hard to hear.

I have to say, the girl's voice does pale in comparison to other voice actors, and I really think it's the recording's fault. You need either a better audio format (I dunno, it sounded like I could hear where the clip started and cut off, so it definitely needs cleaning up a bit) or a better mic, as Dosko said.

Everything else was just dandy, though. Great work!

Pretty good! I liked the style,the feel and the animation. Although it was a bit choppy at times it was still appealing,and the story made me focused and interested all the way through although it was a tad cliche I enjoyed it. I love stuff like this.I also hope you keep the jazz feel to it,cause I enjoyed that also. Only nit pick I have is the voice actress,shes very hard to understand and lack any emotion. I would recommend her to exert herself more and put in more feeling or just get another who can do a better job. But I'm sure she'll manage.By the way the chracter with the yellow suit,who goes by the name "Bro" reminded me of Gurren Lagaan,the character Kamina also goes by that name Bro. But yeah dude good stuff,look forward to the other.

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Great animation, but the voice acting ruined the experience for me.

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4.40 / 5.00

Sep 17, 2012
2:16 PM EDT
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