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A young girl accidentally ends up in the ruins of a chess-themed city. She is immediately confronted with the hospitality of the remaining denizens but also gains a companion who is as eager as her to escape this place.

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This movie was sort of an unpolished beta-version of the story I'm working on, made in 2012. Don't expect new episodes but rather a reboot!

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Edit: Fun fact: I did everything with a half-dead mouse, just bought a tablet.

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Im honestly glad to see this come out, i didn't expect it this soon tbh. From the pictures, i thought the Mad Hats would be a little bit more organized.
No offense but im kinda dissappointed, i know you normally do art but i was expecting a little more animation with characters. The voices i expected to be a little different; Bro wasn't that far off, Senry-- i wasn't expecting-- but now that i look at her it'd be really difficult to get a voice that'd exactly fit (also i was wondering what her first line was.. i can't make it out ._.)

Anyway, music was nice,
Voices were nice but they don't really seem capable of catching other emotions
The set-up for the story was pretty well done without being too clunky
Art nice (i didn't really like the constant gray; the first minute of it, everything was some shade of gray which is fine for a ruined city but it kinda sets the tone that everything from now on is going to be grayish or brownish and dull- well-what im trying to say is, there was a picture i think u created- of the city, and the neon lights were there an everything, idk i can't find it maybe i imagined it but ya, the only real break in color comes from the 'chess' sign and senry's hair imo, which was nice.

I know it will be a while befor Episode 2 to come out, even if nothing's changed i'll still enjoy the mess outta it. Im curious to see if there will be any fighting, i mean, i can imagine how bro would fight but not-so-much senry, least when it comes to the giant robots or transforming spider chess pieces.

Anyway, thanks for reading, sorry for wasting ur time, can't wait for episode 2


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man this is so fucking good, i have no idea whats going on but i'm loving it anyways!
episode 2 is gonna be interesting


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Great feel, awesome concept. The music is very well placed throughout the animation. Voice of the girl was a little eh but thats just me. I think the whole ruined by chess city is pretty awesome.


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kmau responds:

Thanks!
Voice actors can grow over time!


exciting new beginning to a series. keep up the good work, i'm going to enjoy this series.


kmau responds:

Hope you will!


FAWk this looks good. I wont dare to tell you what is wrong with this, am not good enough as animator or story teller for that yet . Just shut up and take my 5 stars rating


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