Out of Order 1

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A young girl accidentally ends up in the ruins of a chess-themed city. She is immediately confronted with the hospitality of the remaining denizens but also gains a companion who is as eager as her to escape this place.

This movie was sort of an unpolished beta-version of the story I'm working on, made in 2012. Don't expect new episodes but rather a reboot!


Edit: Fun fact: I did everything with a half-dead mouse, just bought a tablet.


4 stars. It's not very cliche. Nice job.

in a new posrt apocalyptic world, a little girl which is around 15-17 years old, met a big guy who can throw cars, and suddenly that girl just decide to trust the big guy with not enough reasoning. it would be a good idea to give it a little bit more more hesitation and resentment at first because gaining trust isnt easy in that setting.
make it more dramatic by putting more story behind how the little girl can Finally begin to trust the big guy first. just saying.

anyway, loving the art style and the voice acting. keep it up and i cant wait to see the next ep

I have to say, the girl's voice does pale in comparison to other voice actors, and I really think it's the recording's fault. You need either a better audio format (I dunno, it sounded like I could hear where the clip started and cut off, so it definitely needs cleaning up a bit) or a better mic, as Dosko said.

Everything else was just dandy, though. Great work!

i find it funny how it shows somewhat of the title in the tag section. Anyway it seems interesting and pretty good for someone with no actual experience in animation

One of the best animations i have seen in a long time!
The voice acting was great. Up until i heard the girl's voice.
Shes not horrible, but she is pityful compared to the other voice actors.

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4.40 / 5.00

Sep 17, 2012
2:16 PM EDT
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