I liked it. The animation and drawing style, the jokes, I liked where it was going. (I am biased, as I was a voiceactor on this =P). The art style is only going to improve with time and practice, but it's already got a nice start. The main thing I would say to work on is timing. I felt like there were a couple pauses that were just stillness with no movement or sound for just a little too long. If you could cut those down in future projects, I think it would really help out the timing =).
I thought this was a pretty well animated short, especially the facial expression, I got an "Eddsworld" vibe right from the start. The voice though (mostly with the blonde character) could have used some work. It's obvious you're still learning, but you should keep at it! Good job :)