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Just a short animation I made. From now on I am starting a NEW SERIES called TechnoBeasts. More on that on Youtube!


Pretty Good! I can imagine you and your "TechnoBeasts" series will be very promising! Hopefully you'll still be contributing here since I find it more at home here to review and be honest than over on YouTube. People on there make big deals and even go off topic in either retarded discussions that don't relate to whats being shown and or are arguing amongst themselves in the most immature manners. But I digress, You have an interesting art style that I can tell with the right humor and situations thrown in for good measure I'm going to need a doctor to repair my broken lungs to stop from suffocating to death from laughter! The Audio on here was a tad bit soft for hearing but it can be improved on. You've done well here. And for that you're going to receive a 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you keep on practicing, creating and contributing on here, we need more new faces to be shown up on the portal's lights! I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

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I don't feel that you really went any here with this. The art wasn't horrible, but it wasn't great either. The story pretty much consisted of a guy liking ketchup... not that interesting. Also, this was pretty short, some things can be done quickly and to the point yet leave you rolling on the floor laughing. This, I hate to say, truly evoked no emotion what so ever.

I think it would greatly help for you to actually come up with a concept, storyboard it, then animate it. Also, spend some time to teach yourself about art and animation, not that this was horrible in that regard, it was just somewhat lacking.

Just remember to keep on working at it and to not give up.

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2.88 / 5.00

Sep 16, 2012
11:00 AM EDT
Comedy - Original