you forgot about the music
I think it's a good flash, and a good thng fro mario ^^
Maybe you can add some sound from old mario games, they would fit perfectly and also make some play and replay buttons go to youtube to leanr how to make them there easy.
*Keep up the goood work
You show some potential as a promising sprite animator someday, though the first thing you'll have to fix is the frame rate or the timing. The whole thing was way too fast-paced, don't be afraid to slow down if you need to and think over what the timing will be like in your head. Music and sound effects would also be nice, but things like this sometimes don't need any audio, and if the timing here was fixed it could be something very great.
Its a nice tribute to everybody's favorite plumber! Its very short but very sweet, just like the cake Mario was presented with! Its a cute tribute which amazingly only took you one hour to accomplish. Others might not be merciful or fair but I'm glad to have enjoyed this cute simple tribute I really do. I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. and a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you keep creating and contributing here friend. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
Why didn't you add sound?
I could not find any sound that lasted me the same as the animation