Those layouts look promising!
To be honest, I am not familiar with your work, but do know something good when I see it. Plus, this reminds me of some of the things that were made back 2000-2003. Impressive yet authentic and sincere; elements that are lacking in the vast majority of frontpage submissions since 2008.
Animation: While this isn't as fluid as Jake Hollander, SunnyGOES, Ferguson Winston, and Adam Philips; the layouts in this cartoon are excellent. All of the poses are dynamic, solid, and had a bit of roughness that added to the atmosphere. In addition, the selective colors reminded me of Razzo's* old work, which is a plus in my book. (*=Blanco y Negro and Kong)
Audio: You did a great job on the choice of music, but most of the voices were rushed. I think a pop filter may help with that.
Content: It may not have much of a plot, but the premise of this was enough to get the point across. Thus, the no filler approach that made Blaxploitation films popular worked in your favor. Of course, what really made this shine is the direction. It has shown me that you have the eye of a director. Kudos for using underused subjects, which is also a plus.
-The Layouts are excellent and the animation showed potential.
-Voices sounded rushed
-Not the best animation, nor was it the worst
Overall: Here's a nine from me. (4.5/5)
Thank you kindly for your honest and well written review of my work, I take the good with the bad and aim to produce another great production down the line. Hopefully when I have more time to dedicate to another project such as this which allowed alot of flexibility. Having the range to do almost what I want with no limits was a plus which is sometimes good and bad but I choose what element worked best for my subject matter. Thanks again for the review I appreciate your time in doing that dude.
Love Black Dynamite!
You have a loose, weird style that's very interesting....I would have liked to see more frames.
I would too Poisonheart but I am saving that ammo for another righteous project. The idea was to let loose and be fluid with the lines. There were more scenes and action but I simply wanted to have that straight to the point time and action. I may still go back a few days or so down the line and add things but for now that's a wrap. Thanks for watching.
i sure this film cost a lot in pomade purchasing.
hahaha. Thanks dude. yes it did. Thanks for watching.