Well done for utilizing the animation the way you did, but aesthetically not so pleasing. Your short lacks any profound message from the original novel - besides the quote you just scribbled up there. Try doing more with your imagery next time instead of making quick references to the original material. Think of your audience as people who have no experience with the novel, and how you'd show imagery to convey the heart of the novel.
i liked this book ...your flash ehh not so much
It looks like you have a decent start, but the entire movie looked like an introduction to me.
I love animal farm but this one is way too short. Only to show 2 or 3 illustrations and the main sentence of the book is not much...but hey, it's Orwell! ;)