I'm really digging your art syle but I would really like to see a story and see what this concept is really all about!
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I'm really digging your art syle but I would really like to see a story and see what this concept is really all about!
there is potential and style
elements to improve:
more fluidity, add more frames per second.
nice visual and colors but animation needs more drawn out frames and it would be more appealing
Woah! That was an awesome short! The style is a tiny bit rough in some parts but is decently detailed and the sound effects were spot on, Including the infamous "I'm firing my lazuh!" dialogue. It had a very dark light ambient atmosphere to it. Its a unique little flash animated short and it show cases your capabilities in animation. I am bestowing upon you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 4/5 in voting power. Again I truly enjoyed this flash, It not every day yo see and anthropomorphic frog meet a sad, agonizing, defeat in a futile attempt to stop someone with greater capabilities than his own. I hope you've enjoyed this review and I hope you contribute more on here. Good day.
Awesome!
I really enjoyed the psychedelic environment.