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DB AF: Episode 1

rated 3.13 / 5 stars
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Aug 21, 2012 | 11:12 AM EDT

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This is the story After the Battle with Xicor...
A new enemy has come
Our heroes will Face their Hardest Task..



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Can't wait to see this continued, but as a Xicor fan (he was the only charecter I ever read about that even remotly intrested me) I am saddened too see that it begins after the battle with him. Hope he makes an appearance down the road.

Anyway, this is the best attempt I've seen at someone seriously making this in any format outside of a manga, so I hope it goes great. Again, can't wait to see more and well done.

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Winglessangelful responds:

Thank you So Much for your support ^^ and Don't worry..Xicor will Return!! and Much more powerful than before :)


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

First off, love the fact that you have a load bar, not many makes those in the UJ section ;)

You got a nice concept to follow up on the DB series, but the intro was a bit to long for my taste, that said it feels like you are hitting the spirit of DB.

Keep it up ;)

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Winglessangelful responds:

Thank you ^.^ and yeaah the intro isn't the best :/ But i tried :D


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

i can understand if it's your first flash but if you've done at least 3 it's terrible no offense

Winglessangelful responds:

Uhhh Nothing's Terrible about it? you cant just say it terrible without telling What is terrible? is it the speed? the action? what so your comment was....Useless you gave me no advice at all


Rated 3 / 5 stars

i will give you a 3 in story

Winglessangelful responds:

Thank you :)


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

was okay not the best thing ive seen.

Winglessangelful responds:

Thanks This is like Only an Intro to the stroy, Next episode will be better ^^