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Thy Birthday Present

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Made for a friend's birthday!

This is a quick toon that I made for a friend (Shuxin/Susan You) on her birthday. As you can see, the toon version of her is strangling an Oshawott, which, metaphorically, is me. She's somewhat obsessed with Vocaloids so I thought this would be the proper animation to make. Like always, it was definitely a learning experience.

The runtime is approximately thirty seconds.

So please enjoy, and watch it a million times if you want to - I won't mind. I would greatly appreciate it if you rate this and provide a review, either positive or negative, that will help me improve in the future.

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fake and gay



Spin dat Oshawott XD



Like everyone says I thought she was flicking me off too. lol. Her breast in the title were too high up yet they looked good but then the video starts and the breasts are in the right place but look horribly deformed. If that grass and sky is a painting you did good but if it was supposed to be a window you did a horrible job at it. Take the v's off the ends and add bars in between the borders. The hidden happy birthday susan button was cute but you told us where it was so it felt like a cheap easter egg. So have fun on future projects and take care of yourself.


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No one will get this other than your friend Susan.


Holon responds:

Not ncessarily. In the title frame, an Oshawott was reaching for her breasts, throughout the animation she was spinning the Oshawott, and at the end the Oshawott has a footprint on him. I think that sums it up!


Was she giving the finger!


Holon responds:

Yep, towards the Oshawott.

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4,477
Votes
421
Score
3.95 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 20, 2012
10:49 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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