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Sexy Heartbeat

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Aug 18, 2012 | 10:03 PM EDT

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doing this for another website, just want to how it is



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In response to your response to missedtarget, and coming from an artist, that is not an angle shot. That is honest to God bad art. You were given constructive criticism and your response was to snap.

Really, nothing is formed quite right. Due to your angling and positioning, part of that eye should be shown. You need to really consider just doing those arms over, and your hands are on the wrong sides. Angling won't make your thumbs switch to the other side of your hands. Also, unless this girl is supposed to be an Amazon of lore, you need to finish that other breast, because it looks like she has none. I don't know, maybe she is a breast cancer patient and suffered a partial Mastectomy. If that is the case, maybe mark that somewhere, because the brain doesn't usually go there automatically.

If 'doing this for another website' means this is supposed to be a professional work, please expect to be laughed at by any viable company. Just want to make sure you're prepared.

There is zero to this and personally, I think it should never have been submitted as it is.

Try to choose your battles better. If you had accepted your constructive criticism with a little more dignity, I would have passed on by and said not a word. I know this means jack-squat to you, but hey, at least you have one review with a rating this deserves.

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Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Right eye is missing, hands are backwards, arms are clunky and badly drawn, left breast isn't finished, underwear doesn't sit properly.

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Yoshimitu responds:

we call that sitting at an angle


Rated 1 / 5 stars

Very short loop... but i bet you will get better at flash!


Rated 1 / 5 stars

Sorry could be better. (This kitty is not amused..face..) Not much to look at. all you get is a heartbeat, like what the doctor hears through a stethoscope..

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Yoshimitu responds:

well i tried :(