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Frosted Sugar Lumps

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I did this short commerical as a test to practice animation. It's no where as great as so many others, but I do like how it turned out, though know its quite limited.


I a, aware of not expecting a good or decent score...if anything, I can read peoples suggestions and hope to use them to improve my animations.

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Not much to bicker about, but next time I suggest you don't upload practice animation to the portal. People will vote you down if your stuff is poor quality or too short.

Also, don't shit on yourself man. I can see your potential. You need to add more inbetweens like MistyE said, and I recommend that you work on your anatomy (specifically hands and arms). It's never impossible for artists to surpass each other either, it just depends on how you make your work and your attitude.

Feel free to check out NG's flash forum for help. Torrent The Animator's Survival Kit, too, Richard Williams is a genius!

Sneakers responds:

Thank you kindly for the input...will try to do something longer next time. I just wanted to get input on it...I was aware of it being short...was done purposely to fit within 10 seconds. The original title was 10 second commercial.

Will look up your suggestions.

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Uploaded
Aug 13, 2012
7:18 PM EDT