I Like Your Choice Of Music, Its Funny And I Like The Work Put in To It For A First Episode.
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This is the first episode in a series I am making called Faster Than Lightning
Two runners by the names of Al and Donny are being chased by a lightning bolt (Bio-Bolt) with a monstrous will. The lightning monster formed from an experiment gone wrong from Al's grandfather 30 years in the past and has finally begun it's rampage after remaining dormant. Al and Donny are flung into the sky where they meet a man who was involved with the Bio-Bolt and has summoned both of them along with others attacked by the lightning monster into his fortress to inform them on what they must partake in.
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Not a terrible first foray into flash animation.
The story is... interesting, but a tad convoluted. The art style is playfully quirky, but could certainly use a bit of polish. The vocals leave a bit to be desired, and are sometimes tough to follow, especially when accompanied by music.
All this being said, it should be noted that it is a solid piece of flash animation. Everyone has to start somewhere, and I've seen a lot worse. Keep working, Sphoje, and things can only get better from here!
ElectroJoe responds:
Thanks for the imput! I'm already 80% complete with episode, and I can definetly fix whatever audio issues I have. I definetly woun't use as much music as this had, though I will have 1 or 2 montage's for action sequences in the second episode (with a bit more fluid ness).
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