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Aug 10, 2012 | 9:02 AM EDT

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final update (8/23/12) for a game im working on to give to a friend for her birthday, but i want feedback first if i shud add or remove or improve anything

-added outlines to characters
-holding hands in together level
-better clouds
-added background
-left side jumping in all levels
-player doesn't fall through levels at the start anymore
-some sentence structure errors (just fixed one :P )
-players walk together
-Grammar fixes

notable bugs
-still not moving with platforms



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Oh my God, I'm going to cry :'( Beautiful


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

you wrote "to get i what wanted" not "to get what i wanted"


Rated 3 / 5 stars

There is a girl who is friendzoned. Game is good but story is hard.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

u shuld remove th pres UP and left level its too hard


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This is a really sweet game you made for her! Also, Iridescent from Linkin Park, that's such a great choice for this game <3
As it was said before, you should improve your grammar and I think we should have to press up then left only when the other girl appears.
Also, when you push your friend away, you should make the speech bubble dissapear. Another thing you could try is to make your friend follow you after you said to her you're sorry, proving that you're closer than ever..?

I really liked it, I think she will love it if you improve these little things C:

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FreakAM responds:

yay !!! thanks for being the first to get that the up and left is actually cuz the other girl is making him struggle,but i do have to remove it from the other levels. Also apart from that, the other tips are well coming from everyone else aswell so im pobably gonna be fixing them soon..