crow the magician

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I WILL ADD SOUND IN A WEEK OR SO. this is a loop I made about a transforming crow.
Story discription:
the magician gives a poor person a watch that he origanaly stole from the jeweler that the poor person sells the watch to.
at the end the magician travels through time, thus making a loop.
all of my movies are going to be loops. I'm running Macromedia flash MX so I don't have a choice.


First of all, you'll want to put a loader on:
http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/
(Remove the spaces so the URL works)

Secondly you'll want to put sound in so that we can understand the character motivations and the story arc. I understand that he changes, but why does he change, and why at that time? Is it to get to work? And if he gets to work, why does he go back immediately, and change into a bird? And why does he drop the watch? Is it to give to the poor so they can be more fortunate? The art style is pretty good, and is only going to get better with practice.

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urbanninja3 responds:

he travels through time at the end, that's why it loops. he does give a poor person a watch, that he origanaly stole from the jeweler that the poor person turns the watch to. It wasn't ment to have sound, but I can re-write the discription to explain that.

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2.35 / 5.00

Aug 8, 2012
11:34 AM EDT