Lovingly so random!
I enjoyed how you named the fast food joint as Wacronalds.
you were right about the 2nd half, maybe since the hamburger is getting shot at, perhaps some bullets whizzing it's way? just seeing those 3 en spurting flames with their guns and no bullets going to n fro may be an improvement.
Reminded me of when i used to work at wendys, and how fucking pissed people got if i forgot something on their sandwich BPremo when I get a car lets talk animation some time:D I really like your art style how smooth it is and badass.