Its Funny! haha Keep it up dude! I add this to my fav! :D
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Okay.. this is the beginning of a series.. I hope you all like it as much as I did the idea.. It's no Animator vs Animation or Pencilmation.. but it is something I like the idea of. Again I hope it is enjoyed by whoever happens to watch this.. and please give comments.. I want to know how and if I should expand alot on this series.. I definetly plan to make a 2nd.. it's up to your criteria if I make more :P. Also if you're wondering, the music is from Timesplitters 1 called "Mall"... I liked the calm but slight strangeness in it.. which I thought fit..
At7Commando responds:
Thank you! :D
That was fun. Bet, you got inspired by Animator vs Animation series.
At7Commando responds:
Yup. I did. :P
Not too shabby man! I can see what you're going for, and these kind of shorts are always great fun. My main crit is that you've positioned the camera really far away, so you end up having a ton of negative space surrounding your character. If you look at the Animator vs Animation or Pencilmation shorts as you mentioned, they play with space well and always keep their characters in good focal ground... you always know where to look. Try playing around with tracking/panning shots.
Nice attempt though, keep rocking!
At7Commando responds:
Thank you, I shall keep rocking!
Well,it defiantly was entertaining,but you could improve on the graphical style and the music.
I hope this series keeps going,and that one day you'll have an awesome series.
At7Commando responds:
Thank you, and I am planning on getting some more fitting music
First off I like how it's like Animator VS Animation but this was pretty boring for the debut. I think you may want to really step it up for the next episode if you hopefully make it. I would really enjoy seeing another episode.
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3/3
At7Commando responds:
Thank you! :D
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