Hey, I thought this was pretty good, as in plot and action wise, but it's a little short. Yeah, otherwise it was good, and you should make this a series but with longer content and maybe a higher framerate.
it was pretty funny
it was alright made me smirk lol
Sometimes animating scenes without dialogue is better than trying to explain everything to your audience through text. Had these been actual soldiers, they wouldnt have talked so stiffly, nor would they had been talking about what they were going to do in areas filled with enemies. Now granted- this wasnt supposed to be realistic; and I know that- however the text was just so distracting. Try doing more animation, and show us more. Don't tell us. The other issue with the text is that at times you can't read it. It's black- against other black lineart and objects in your backgrounds.
However your background was completely filled in and the characters looked well drawn out for a madness flash. Certainly, I think you have some potential. Animate more, and keep trying.
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