It wasn't terrible for a first flash. Some of the jokes were OK. The lip syncing could use some work and so could the voice acting.The static was too loud and it seemed like you were copying asdf movie. Besides the mouths there wan't much actual animation or sound. Try and not use the line tool for everything maybe. Keep trying!
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Mixacation is my first flash animation and it gets better through out the flash.
Enjoy!
number 2 wont be out for a while
ChildPlayFlashFilms responds:
It was just the animating style of asdf movie. I will give you that. But I was just trying to get started.
Thanks for the notes. I'l keep that in mind.
It was your first flash submission, and it wasn't bad, so don't be discouraged by any low scores. I think you should definitley keep going as I see some real potential for humor here. There were a couple of issues, but nothing that any first time flash animator wouldnt make.
It lacked color, which led to a really boring stage of black and white flatness. Adding some background in would have been great, and led to a more finished looking flash animation. My only REAL issue with this was the tv snow sound you had inbetween each scene. I understand what you were going for, and it was the simplest way for you to switch scenes without a buttload of animation. The problem was that the audio for the tv sound was SO loud, and the voices...were not so loud. I found myself bringing the volume up to hear the jokes only to get deafened by the tv sounds.
There was some length to it though, and it seemed like you had a good time making this. My score may or may not be higher than other people's. I don't know, but as I said before, if you happen to get that low score don't let it discourage you. You have some potential here.
I look forward to your future submissions. Keep rocking friend!
ChildPlayFlashFilms responds:
Thank you thank you thank you! My new animation is in color and im spending way more time on it.
And the audio i had no idea about. So thanks for telling me about that, i'l work on it. I'm not using that transition in the next one so yeah. I'l try boosting the volume, but i already have most of the audio in the flash animation. My new animation won't have that much improvement but, it will have a noticeable effect.
um sorry no it sound like little kids talking poor at work sorry no no no no try harder next time
ChildPlayFlashFilms responds:
this was my first flash animation ever.
I'm putting more work into the next one.
More Scripts, better animating, and funnier jokes. 0 stars. Really?
well if that's your opinion. I agree with you, it was poor and I am only 11. I am a newbie to flash and am very terrible at it. I'm not the WORST though.
But at least you wrote a honest review. Because I hate when people tell me that I did something good when it actually sucks crap.
Child play out!
