Fuck, my lights were off and i only read the beginning, the last paragraph made me see some pair of eyes staring at me on top of my computer, bogeyman much?
i have to say this is one of the creepiest stories i read, hats off to you my friend. I would love some more content from you my good man!
I only made this story to capture the fear it instilled in me and show my friends, but after everyone's comments I may just be motivated to produce something new :) thank you!
Quite a riveting story. I was not expecting any of the jump scares! I think this should be on the front page!
good story =] i might use it sometimes if i get the chance...
Yes definitely feel free to re-use the story, this one is after all already an adaptation. I tried to put my own slant on it to make it more relevant to an older audience and to also include themes that personally made it even more creepy for me (I got a little scared writing it at times). So be sure to alter it and make it YOUR ideal horror. Thank you and everyone for your support :)
Nice story i loved it! the funny part was at the beginning were it says yes or no. I tried clicking on No but it just disappeared.