I kinda like the flipbook approach you took with this. I also enjoyed the nice blend of decent vocabulary mixed with vulgarity, it matches your characters well. Looking forward to the next installment!
ehh, aint bad
Nice cheezy writing, a cliche for every occasion. Acceptible artwork, though not inspired in any way. Looking forward to the next installment.
cool art though
some kind of introduction would be nice; i wasnt aware it was a comic/flip/whatever book untill I read the commentary.