Holy $hit! That was very good. It is a wounderful story. Can't wait till the next one.
**The man bows and slowly stands up strait**
" Very Good job sir!"
I enjoyed this very very much. Thank you.
in one word: BEAUTIFUL
I'm waiting for Part 2! :) I hope it comes out soon and its as good if not better than this. I think this is as asome232 said: it is "...a small piece of art."
Although, I did enjoy this a pause button would be nice.
absoultly beautiful. i love all of your work. thank you so much for sharing your wonderful work with us. never stop doing what you do.