Anivation and drawing right from 2005, very bad. I hope you made this in one day. Rap also was foolish and silly. 0,5 for trying and 1 for that effect in the end, it was nice.
awww damn, I was aiming for a 1990 art style :(
I admit I don't really care much for rap but it was good and the way you animated the lyrics was great it flowed well and the audio was great. I like stuff like this, quality animation that displays the music and pun not intended, "brings it to life" doing this tends to give the music an extra feeling to me and makes it more original than normal music videos. I say this cause with animation your only limited by your imagination, and you can give it a extra quality. That was a bit of my view and overall critique, as for personal view on it again I like how you portrayed your lyrics with the animation but I have to say it could be better now for advice always try and find ways to improve if even a little cause like I said I don't care much for rap but you made this pretty great with the animation and you deserve kudos for that. I hope to see more from you good luck.
Drawing is really good and animations are pretty good too but everything is ruined by rap. Sorry but rap is just... specially when it sounds like teenage is trying too hard to be "cool" :/ overall I liked this but cause of rap wont give more than 2.
meh, im not into much rap, but when you take it to a super natural state, that was alright
could you try one on zelda or halo? or maybe assassin's creed?
I'd like to give 2.5 but 3 because i'm into rap. Would had been higher if you did less repetitive lyrics and scenes. Also the ending was, eh. No need for the 'real' gangsta stare and quick escape into the tv.