First, I want to comend you on being such an awesome neko. by not drawing attention to the fact that you are a neko running a place in a human world more than being just that, you pulled it off with dignity and flaire. so Koodos to you (sorry not the phone ^..^)
Other than that, I have but one problem... I can't find your easter egg.
There's a stack of papers that appear in the background in the last scene. You gotta be quick to hit them.
Also she's a wolf girl. A lot of people confuse her for a cat. haha
ideam al anterior. tu trabajo es hermoso.
Everything looks smooth for the most part except there was a part of the audio that seemed off, but other than that this was well made and I like the characters they were different actually (couldn't put my finger on a description). I can't wait to see more from you and I would like to see a longer cartoon if possible, and I see someone who will leave a impression that will last. Good luck.
Hah, not good at tweening you say? That's good! Cause I dunno about anyone else, but I think it generally looks bad. Your frame by frame work looked good, and the video was short but the length of a submission shouldn't effect the rating I think. Keep up the good work :D If you keep doing these little shorts you can only improve. I expect to see more from you.
You already got everything nailed down probably...
But the script...its always important not to force jokes right in the audience face when it comes to comedy it just becomes awkward, not that there was anything wrong with it.
This is a good start and I would love to keep track of your future animations