What the hell is this?
First of all, an entire cartoon about a character who only spouts expository dialouge and one-liners isn't a good idea. That's why Nylock is a supporting character in the first place. It's, frankly, boring to see Nylock and evil Nylock explain everything rather have you animate characters doing interesting things.
The story is completely uninteresting...mostly because of the characters. Like, it feels like you could take Demonking out of the cartoon and nothing would be changed. He's just a plot devices, and has no interesting observation on what Nylock and other Nylock are doing, so he's useless.
None of the jokes are funny. It's just Nylock explaining things....haha?
And I hate the art style in this thing, man. It feels lazy..you didn't even bother to ink the still images. I don't see why you couldn't have done some good limited animation in this. You went to one of the best animation schools in the US (around the same as REBECCA SUGAR, I might add) yet you still draw like a 15 year old with .hack-tier design ability. I just don't understand it. You STILL don't know how to structure a head, draw a decent pose or keep your proportions consistent. It pisses me off because I know you can do better than this. :(
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WHAT DID YOU DO TO SIMDRAGON? I knew he might be like Nylocke in the over-needed role-playing, but this is just insanity! Good short nonetheless.
Well, that was pretty awesome Chris! You're a great inspiration to me, especially with how smooth you animating is. Good luck my friend. I hope to be up there with you some day.