Ok. The animation was a bit rough. The voice acting was varried, but you need better recording equipment. The volume didn't vary much. There should have been crashing sounds when the father crashed, the gun should have been louder, and the guy that burst out of his house should have been louder. The jokes were good but sort of random. Overall, you already have the hard part done, it was entertaining. But the sound and animation distracted from the story. Practice on your art and sound and you will be making consistently great content.

Some Scenes get a little jerky and the audio+voice acting was weird