Not bad. I like the animation but, the storyline was okay. who am i kidding this was great.
What i watch :D ? But good for first animation :)
That was actualy pretty good, cosidering how short it was and the fact that nobody moves their body parts. The perception of the sceens was way off, but the animation and movement of the character as a whole was kinda smooth.
Okay... what did I just watch... B.T.W you did good for your first animation
For your first animation it is pretty okay, but I don't think you should post them on Newgrounds yet at this quality. First of all you didn't use a preloader, second you should have made your characters more living by adding stuff like walk animations, and having them really fire the weapons instead of just adding sounds and muzzle flash. Finally I think you should practice more on drawing backgrounds and colouring your characters. My final thought is that you should go on practicing and I think you will be a decent animator with more practice and experience.