Mini platform game

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This is a small platform game.
Since this is my first game in flash i truly apologise fr not having right sounds , efffects,etc.
i would like u 2 please give me some advise on how 2 improve it and make a beeter game in d future


Yay I win. ;D

its a good first game,you should work on ur spelling,more people will want to play if it has good spelling,also a little longer would be nice

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Disgusting, and to top it off you used Jokerman. WTF?

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Nice first flash game.when I did my first flash game it didnt even have a title screen because I didnt know how to do it.

The game was entertaining, but I don't think it will uphold to the standards of Newgrounds.

First of all, there are only 5 levels. I beat this game in a minute or two, so next time, try adding more content.

Second, the level design seemed rushed. You kept adding in moving/spinning objects, which didn't really add anything. Also, in the 4th and 5th levels with the disappearing blocks, I was able to fall off them and onto the goal area.

Lastly, the graphics weren't that good. The player is a blue sphere with no animations, the background was just a plain white color with no details, and your choice of font wasn't the best.

Everything else in your game is fine. I liked your choice of music, and the platforming engine is good. Just work on what I said and I think it could be a really great game.

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1.98 / 5.00

Jun 29, 2012
10:20 AM EDT
Puzzles - Other