Plot was kinda decent I guess... The animation is pretty amateur ( I don't know I don't really animate) and voice was less of enthusiastic...
Patience is the key to success..so take your time in creating your ideal animation cos I got the feeling that you just wanted to submit to submit this ya know?
I'm going to give you a 3 for effort!!! And cos I know you'll improve over time.
seriously nothing new i mean i has idea like this when i was 5 or 6 years old for the graphic i would give you good point if it where liek you first animaiton so yeah forgot about those point bro anyway do not continute this serie i would have gived you 5 star and 5 pico if i was 5 or 6 years old -.-
Why would I discontinue a series because you had an idea similar to this when you were 5? I appreciate your time in writing this review, but I won't stop this series, my skill can only go up, I won't stop now.
your animation is a little lacking in the sence that it runs slow (story vs, timing, not animation speed) and you don't have much to go by. this is a good start though, I can see a lot of potential in your story. In my opinion, use long pauses (like done with the naming of the sword) to build up suspence before or after a fight. Use really fast motions durring the fight and slightly faster motions durring the peaceful times. I walk down a street faster than Scare does, which makes it drawn out rather than captivating. Also, keep consistancy.. if he has a hand without an arm, still use his hand to grasp the sword. How the blade appeared when you named the sword, his fingertips would be showing and the bottom of his palm too, showing that he has a hand.
But this could all just be me. It's a compelling story all in all and I hope you keep it up.
I appreciate your review and I will definitely take your points, good ones mind you, into consideration when creating the next episode.
Pretty decent, actually, work on the coloration of your character, and create an animation for when he kills the shades, also, this music is crud. But you got a 4 because of the story's potential.
I appreciate your review,
A pretty good plot for a decent animation.
I appreciate your review.