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Jun 27, 2012 | 5:16 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place June 28, 2012

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When the world is struck with spirits of the forgotten, one man can stop them, Scare. A lonely husk of an exterminator goes city to city helping those with a shade problem, but what he doesn't know is that he is needed for something far greater than the lesser shades.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

The animation was not very good so you lose 2.5 stars.
The sound was... strange but you have one so that good. They are not emotion in the voice. For those two thing I remove .5
I can skip the start but is to long... very to long. It should be around 10 sec. If we skip the start your video is to short. The character are badly draw. Try do make more detail on them like some shadow under some equip or some texture and try to not hide the fight with black screens. Draw them will add some good element in your project.The voice you use is without emotion. Try to add some sound like the character expiry or add some volume. Start to speak slowly and when the character get angry make him speak faster. Change those think and your video will be better.

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LefyBoy responds:

Thank you for your review and you had some very good points that I will take into consideration when making the next episode.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty cool idea. With some slightly better animations and a waaaay better soundtrack, this could be real cool. im already intrigued, and hope this goes through so i can look forward to the next one

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Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Your scenes are too long which does not keep the watchers interest, the dialogue could be improved on by using some other medium of delivery. Animation concepts and figures are not bad along with story board however in skits like this a fast paced action with more content to the fights are preferable.

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