The Monster

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Due to my poor writing skills, any spelling or grammatical corrections/critiques are welcome.
This is a "Character Story", which is a prequel and character side stories that will not be shown in my series/story "The Other Side".

This is the Monster's "Character Story", who is inspired by Naruto.

Music: Nier OST by Keiichi Okabe
Check out the rest of the characters: http://youtu.be/8OUZoGdh5Nc


Wow, bro, I'm a fan now! I watched your first one, and I really look forward to seeing the rest of this series! I love the simplicity of how everything is in still images with typed dialogue to let our imagination take over, and how the music helps to keep us attached to the story! I look forward to what happens later on! Well done!

exninja123 responds:

thank you! :D

Can't wait for the series!

exninja123 responds:

hehe, thanks! :D

This was a great flash. I liked the artwork and the plot of the whole thing + the music of course. the fact on on the character design really shown on how you were portraying the characters rally well done. :D

exninja123 responds:

thank you! :D

Awesome storyline... was kinda expecting it to continue with the strawman... Kinda wanted to watch more! But anyways I hope you finish 'The Other Side' soon

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exninja123 responds:

thank you! :)

wow. ok:
Storyline:Your story is pretty good, I don't know how she survived the attack without using her power, but that's minor, it could be a bonus with her power. Anyways... The story was clear and flowed evenly and well.

Character design: your characters are well drawn out. I quite enjoyed how the straw man looked a little like Loofy from One Piece and your character sort of looked like a misfit hero/ misunderstood badguy.

Sound: I would have loved to hear voices in this video, but you did get a good choice of music, at any rate.

All in all, I have nothing really to say against your video and furthermore, I look forward to watching your Other Side movies.

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exninja123 responds:

glad you enjoyed it! :D

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3.75 / 5.00

Jun 27, 2012
4:50 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place June 29, 2012