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The Monster

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Jun 27, 2012 | 4:50 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place June 29, 2012

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Due to my poor writing skills, any spelling or grammatical corrections/critiques are welcome.
This is a "Character Story", which is a prequel and character side stories that will not be shown in my series/story "The Other Side".

This is the Monster's "Character Story", who is inspired by Naruto.

Music: Nier OST by Keiichi Okabe
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Rated 5 / 5 stars

I do not say this very often, In the begining, it seemed like there was too much dialog and not enough artwork, but...damn. As the astory went on, I could almost hear the girl speaking. The feelings I got from this are still making my heart race. This is truely amazing. You have something wonderful here. :)

exninja123 responds:

thank you!
glad you enjoyed it! xD


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Really lovely animation. Simple, and when combined with the text, very power. The slight use of red also added to her emotions. The only real let down was the transition between music. You could've made sure there was no gap, and that the genre of the music didn't change greatly from for example, slow and sad, to upbeat and epic.

Overall, really well done. Another favourite from me :)

exninja123 responds:

thank you! :)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Despite your unwavering lack of self confidence, this was actually pretty interesting. I would love to see some progression in this story line, it has a lot of potential. An idea, you ought to introduce boy trouble into the plot. I know it wont be easy, but i would also like to see "the monster". This entire idea is interesting to me, and im glad i stumbled upon you and your video, so i decided to speak up and spread a little sunshine.

exninja123 responds:

You'll see more of "The Monster" in "The Other Side"


Rated 4 / 5 stars

The only grammar thing I caught was, "I quetly sneaked away" should be "I quietly snuck away". The art is a great improvement, but I'd like some screens to be part text and part drawing (in a dynamic way). The music was really well chosen but the transitions were often too blatant, I prefer fading on everything when it's not a surprise moment. When it is a surprise moment there should be some other noise to end the music like a thunder clap or something. Try adding ambient noises in the future, like crowds rioting, a grandma laugh, a sound of the girl's power being released. Thanks for sharing and good job!

exninja123 responds:

Thank you!
And for the thoughtful review! :D


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

its ok, kind of interested in the other side story now.

exninja123 responds:

Thank you!
Hopefully I will make it soon! :)