Keep it up. Your animations are possibly the most amazing shorts I've seen on Newgrounds, in terms of both emotion and general artistic beauty. One problem is that the story is rather unrealistic, but hey. You don't need realism in anything when it comes to Newgrounds.
Five stars because the good in it outshines the cheesy storyline by a long shot.
NOTHING TO SAY cause its awsome
Art and the music are beautiful but good lord who taught you how to write a storyboard or a storyline. If I had to make an educated guess it would be the british show doctor who. Sure I just met you but I want you to come along with me no questions asked. No? Okay. I'm just gonna leave and not fix your roof leaving you to rot in your prison forevermore. Sheesh what a bad story. The ending was pretty bad in itself. For these types of plots, the ending would have been better if he flew away and it skipped to several years in the future and she turned on his picture projector as a reminder of what she missed out on and have her wear the goggles. The whole throw away your entire life of fear for a cute boy ending will only appeal to uneducated girls that like fairy tale endings.
This is really sweet :3
Wow. Just wow.