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Apple Jack'd

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This is the 2nd short in a series called Kayla the Klutz. It centers around Kayla Flotsam and the wacky situations she gets into. The shorts are done in a style inspired by classic cartoons, with no dialogue and an emphasis on the animation and action.

Ep. 2: Apple Jack'd

Kayla the klutz goes to extreme measures just to get an apple out of a tree... even though she could easily just go buy one or eat something else.

Note: My apologies for the large file size. I've tried to fix it, but I can't.

Reviews


it was ok.



it looks like a short you would find on cartoon network. only good.



Now that was hilarious.
However, keep working at it.
I think she always gives up too easily or soon.



With all the upskirts, there were no panty shots. 4/5



Very nice - This seems like I would find it on TV during one of the li'l shorts.
Brilliant.
Only thing was; how did she manage to grip the tree? It seemed like she was squishing it like fabric.
Ah well, all-in-all 4.5 because the random silences at the end of the sound clips annoyed me a bit - try using some low-volume ambiance or something.
Keep up the good work!


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7,790
Votes
329
Score
4.01 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 23, 2012
9:49 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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