The graphics are good, and the concept is good. The only thing I would have to say in criticism is that it has been done before, and you have created that symmetry for a reason. Why mess with failure? I can understand that point, but I would say you would want to improve what has already been done, make it more innovative. For example ie... Rayman Origins. It is a platform game, but it has crazy ideas, and new interactive events.
Good job man!