I see you improved, well, still, the characters need more movement, they look a bit stiff!
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Hello, everyone! This is a project I made for my mom on Mother's Day 2011. I'm sorry for the fact it's Korean, but if you want me to I can change it to English.
SunOh responds:
The animation was supposed to be simple. Oh, well.
Could you change it from korean to english please?
SunOh responds:
okay
Animation and style was good, but the comic was in mandarin chinese (I think) and I couldn't understand it.
SunOh responds:
Mandarin Chinese? What the crap are you talking about? Did you even read the description?
Your graphics and animations were better than some, but considering this is a mostly english-speaking site, I'm guessing most people would indeed want it to be in english. I had no idea what was going on, but your characters' faces were kinda cute. :p Redo it in english, make it a little longer, and maybe make the animation a little more... animated, and you'll have a much better flash. :)
SunOh responds:
Nikoli- inspired by Phil Eggtree
Ken- inspired by super-saiyen Goku and got his name from "KAIO-KEN!," the saying a person says before he/she goes super-saiyen
Sorry I wasn't able to make it longer cause it was past 12 and I was tired.
I had to NOT make it more animated 'cause I had to get it done as fast as I can. Thanks for the comment.