The sound is not so good, the blood animation is not good, i think i have already watched a similar animation from OneyNG about Machinima but that doesn't makes it worse, just as note. For being an animation that, as it has a paper background doesn't needs to be colored, the lines of the brush are not drawn properly.
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My second Animation uploaded on Newgrounds!
Total of 2 Days of work.
********Don't understand the point of this?********
Its for dumb people who keep asking you to subscribe to them and they'll subscibe you back.
Hopefully you have enjoyed this.
IKR L0L!
Idea wasnt bad but the voice acting and animation was just simply bad.
The fact that you worked on this for a total of two days appalls me.
Take more time on your animations and maybe next time it might get a higherscore.
GarrysWorld responds:
Thanks for your advice!
I will surely continue animating and hopefully I will get better. About the voice acting, I'm terribly sorry. I really can't find a voice actor LOL.
Again thanks for your honesty!