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Rise of chaos episode 1

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Rise of chaos episode 1. this is what's going to lead up to the rest of the series. with the clip i showed you when mav leaves you will see his origin in episode 2. i'm building up tension for the big fight at the end of the series. there will be action along the way. so stay tough. this script i have up here is one not too many people are used too.

Press spacebar to play after you click play. this is only a beta version of it that i'm releasing. i have a bunch of voice actors working on the script for this. i can't seem to find any one willing to play the scouts yet. hope soon i have two girls so far. for venus and mercury. well. enjoy. the real version of this will have the voices.

Here is the plot. it took me a while i had to make some tweeks but i got the plot of it right. when i do release the version of it with the voice acting i will have the announcer speak the plot.

an ancient evil back before the moon kingdom began to flourish. an evil man named chaos lived on the earth that had the ability to control the universe and all of creation it's self. when he realized what he could do he tried to destroy the first obstical in his way. the moon kingdom. when princess serenity at the time rose to fight him he began to over power her and with the help of tuxedo mask they were able to seal this evil up in a tomb and a pyramid was built over him to keep the evil sealed for ever. the only way he can be released is if the three stages of chaos trials are met and when they are, He will rise once again.


Now that I think about it, there's no way this would have worked if I hadn't fixed it for you. Most of the objects on your timeline were movieclips and they would have gone out of sync when you paused for the text boxes. You still haven't figured out the difference between a graphic and a movieclip.
Anyway, I was impressed by the 3D scene of Mavericks room. I think the credits last too long, and then they froze for some reason. Try just doing a 30 second clip of the song or something instead of trying to use it all. That will also help reduce your file size. I'm interested to see Chaos in action.

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Punisher33 responds:

of course. i agree with that. i probably would have had errors the works. that's the reality of it. this thing has been going up and down all day today. chaos will be well worth it when he is finally. that's why the ones that were graphics i left as graphics and the ones i changed the movie clips where the ones with texts on it. because look at the clip i leaked i learned a huge lession from that.

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2.28 / 5.00

Jun 15, 2012
6:09 PM EDT